Thriller Synopsis

A man stands on a train platform, walking further towards an incoming train. Forwards to a month later. A man walks home, but gets knocked out, and kidnapped by a mystery antagonist. He wakes up alone, bloody and tied up, but gets released by a mystery woman. She tells him her boss kidnapped him, and mistook him for his twin brother, a drug dealer who stole something from him, but supposedly committed suicide a month earlier. The woman helps him escape the city, while our protagonist tries to figure out what his brother stole, and why his body was never found. 

Thriller Opening - Script

Camerawork in Thrillers - UPDATED

Within the Thriller genre, camerawork is important as it is a way to keep the audience attentive to what is happening onscreen, and can make them focus on certain elements within a scene. Thrillers are often intense and active, certain scenes being made to make the audience feel strong emotions such as fear and excitement, and make them feel truly involved in whats happening. 

An example of this is in Jason Bourne, a Thriller/action film. In the two first scenes of this movie clip, we are shown the protagonist making an escape. The camera angles in this scene are designed to make the audience feel the intensity and risk of what is happening. An example of this are the canted and low angle shots that are often used. Using low angle shots makes the audience aware of the significance and power of the protagonist (Jason Bourne). In this shot the camera focuses on the moterbike as it moves, which emphasises its importance in helping him escape, and also shows the power of the bike, suggesting it is equal to our main protagonist. The canted angle used in this shot and many others in this scene suggest the disorientation and fast pace of the scene, emphasising the imminent threat and our protagonists need to get away. 

Continuously throughout this scene, the camera is moving. It is often shaking side to side and wobbling as it moves to focus on each moving character. Doing this adds to the intensity and pace of the scene, making the action seem unrehearsed and disorientated, adding to the realistic effect. The camera going astray as it attempts to focus on what is happening makes the audience aware of the number of things happening, adding to the disorientation of the scene. 

Another element of camerawork within these scenes is the use of whip pan as the camera moves to focus on the incoming threat. This quick motion of the camera adds to the fast pace of the scene, making it appear more intense and keeping the audiences attention. Moving to show individual parts of what is happening within the scene also makes certain that the audience are aware of the danger for the protagonist, and know what is happening within the scene. 

Point of view shots are also used within this scene. The view of the driver in this shot shows the vehicles quick swerves and movements, emphasising the danger of what is occurring. Doing this makes the audience aware of the instability of the characters, and makes them empathise with our protagonist. This also adds to the involvement that the audience feel, emphasising the severity of the situation.

In shots focusing on our protagonist, over the shoulder shots are often used. Doing this ensures the audience see everything the character does, and also adds to the empathy the audience are led to feel for the character, as they witness everything they do and are able to feel fully involved in the scene. In this shot, an accident is almost caused as the protagonist almost crashes into the SWAT van. This quick paced moment of fear added to the use of the over the shoulder shot helps to add to the involvement the audience feel, and keeps them feeling the tension and danger of the scene.

Close-up shots are also used in this scene, focusing on our protagonist Jason Bourne. The use of these shots is to show the emotions of this character as he attempts to escape. The determination on his face shows the audience his attitude towards his situation, emphasising the bravery and purposefulness represented in this character. 

The camerawork in these scenes show the action involved within the film, and present the overall fast pace of the film. Many of the shots, such as the point of view shots, close up shots and over the shoulder shots make the audience feel involved in the action, as well as making them empathise with the protagonist. The quick cuts used, especially in the first part of the first scene, make the action appear more intense, adding to the fear and thrill felt by the audience. Overall, the camerawork in these scenes make the action seem more realistic and fast paced, and focus on making the audience feel involved in the film. 

I hope to be able to replicate this use of camerawork within my own Thriller opening, perhaps making it appear fast paced, and using shots such as close-ups and point of view shots to make the audience see a situation from one characters perspective. 

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Purpose of Opening Scenes in Thrillers

In any film, especially a thriller, the opening scene is very important. It needs to captivate and keep the audiences attention, raising questions and creating intrigue and mystery. It also needs to give an idea of the setting - location and time period - and make the audience have some understanding of what the plot will be.

An example of a film opening that does this is 'The Women In Black',  released 2012 and directed by James Watkins. The audience are introduced to this film by an eerie opening, in a child's bedroom. The first shots of the film shows three children sitting on the floor of the bedroom, playing with dolls and a tea set, important because later in the film we learn that dolls is a recurring theme of the film. 

In this shot, we see the three young girls, as well as their surroundings. From this, the audience are immediately introduced to the time period of the film, due to the clothes, nature of what they are playing (tea sets is often a cliche theme when young children are involved in this time period), and interior of the room. They are wearing pale dresses of pink and white, colours that connote innocence, which help to add to the sympathy and shock of the audience when they realise what will happen later in the scene. 

The very first shot is a close up of the tea cups, which immediately introduces the film location as England, as tea is a stereotypical item that is often associated with England. 

The music added to this scene immediately tells the audience that this film is not lighthearted, as the calm and slow sound gives a chilling and eerie effect, making the audience on edge, aware that something sinister is about to happen. This foreshadows the feelings of the audience throughout the film, as they are constantly on edge. 

This shot shows the three children all looking the same way at the same time, making the audience aware they are looking at something off-screen. The fact that the camera stays positioned to be focusing on the girls makes the audience question what they are looking at, adding to the eerie atmosphere, and prompting the idea of paranormal activity being involved. The music also rises in volume towards this point in the scene, making the audience aware that the atmosphere has changed, and adding emphasis on this point, suggesting to the audience that it is important and something bad may be about to happen.

The following shots show the three girls standing up and beginning to walk towards the window, crushing their seemingly beloved toys as they do so. The blank and vacant expression on their faces suggests the life has been drained from them, suggesting to the audience that they are possessed, and further enforcing the idea of paranormal activity. Doing this at the start of the film makes the audience aware of the theme of the film, and that an evil spirit may be the antagonist in the story. 

Following this, we see the girls jump from the window in unison, shocking the audience. The music continues at the same pace, continuing to suggest that this is an emotionless and vacant atmosphere, and enforcing the idea of paranormal activity. 

This opening is very effective, and instantly captures the audiences attention. The darkness of the room contrasts with the bright dresses that the children are wearing, enforcing the idea that they are surrounded by an evil atmosphere. The rule of three has also been used in this scene, as there are three children, as well as three windows. The use of three makes it more memorable to the audience, a technique often used in thrillers. Doing this ensures that the audience remember this scene throughout the rest of the film, keeping them on edge. 
The questions raised with this opening, and the intrigue of what is happening makes it evident that this is a thriller film, the tense and eerie atmosphere ensuring the audience know the nature of the film, and are constantly waiting for the next harrowing aspect. 

The Book Of Eli Opening Scene Analysis - UPDATED

The first shot of this scene shows a forest. This iconic environment is often used to create a certain type of atmosphere in a film, as they can be places full of mystery and intrigue.
The green tint of the shot paired with the non-diegetic glowing light from above creates an eerie and sinister atmosphere. The audience are instantly given the idea that the environment is threatening, the ominous and gloomy forest carrying connotations of threat and peril, putting the audience at unease. Green often has connotations of nature and is likely used in this scene because of this. However green can often create a sense of sickness and contamination, suggesting the environment is unhealthy. This gives the audience the sense of danger.

As the camera moves slowly across the ground, the first thing the audience sees is a gun. This immediately creates questions for the audience, as they are made aware that something dark and violent has potentially occurred. A gun, an iconic symbol of hatred, is often used in thrillers. This shot shows it seemingly abandoned, making the audience wonder how it got there and why.

After seeing the gun, the camera leads the audience to see a hand, and as the camera continues to move, they become aware that it is a dead body. This immediately pairs suspicion in the audience's minds, as after seeing a gun they know that this was no ordinary death. It is evident that the body has been there for a while, which further leads to the question of where this is and why it has not been found.
The hand is the first thing that the audience see of the body, and it is outstretched towards the gun. This makes the audience question whether the gun belongs to him, and further enquire who he is and why he died.

In this close-up shot, the audience are introduced to the first character. The green hue paired with the gas mask suggests the air is toxic and unbreathable. This makes the audience question where this is and gives the feel of a post-apocalyptic dystopian world. The use of masks in thriller films is iconic, as it has connotations of mystery. This makes the audience wonder who is behind the mask, and whether they are to be trusted.

An interesting part of this shot is the camera angle. The low angle shot makes the figure look bigger, suggesting his dominance and power. This makes the audience further question who he is and what authority he has. This angle can make people look unequal, as if they have a higher power, making this character seem untrustworthy, and someone to be feared.
The background of this shot is also intriguing, as the audience may wonder what is floating in the air. The ash-like substance suggests a volcanic atmosphere, further enforcing the idea that this is a toxic and unsafe environment.

In this shot, the figure is quite small and does not look as powerful as they did in previous shots. Before this, the audience are shown that they shoot a stray cat with an arrow. It is in this shot that they look down on it before picking it up. The hunched over posture and folded arms suggests guilt and shame for killing the creature. This makes the audience question their morality, and whether they killed it for sport or sustenance.
This shot adds to the sinister atmosphere of this scene, as it is evident that the figure is alone. This makes the audience further question who they are and what their purpose is.

This scene includes many components of a thriller. It creates mystery and makes the audience question what's happening and why. It is an eerie scene, which keeps the audiences attention by moving the camera slowly to show them what has happened, raising questions. The act of making the audience see a gun and then a body adds the element of surprise,  as if what they see gets steadily worse and events unfold, making them question what's going to happen next. This scene also uses iconic features of a thriller, such as guns and masks. Doing this makes the audience aware that something sinister and brutal has happened and will continue to happen. The questions raised makes the audience attentive, as they are eager to know what's going to happen next.

I will hopefully use the components within this Thriller opening when creating my own. I like the use of colour to create an atmosphere and hope to bring this within my opening, as well as the slow reveals to show the audience the sinister tone of the scene. When creating my Thriller opening I also want the audience to ask questions to add a sense of mystery and intrigue, to leave them wanting to see more and understand how the story develops.

Film Pitch

A man gets caught up in the world of violence and crime after his identity is mistaken.

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